The extravagance, madness, and prideof such a desire.

Presenting a balanced view is not easy and requires training as well as very good English. I would recommend going for either agree 100% or disagree 100% unless you feel confident in your English. At no time can you completely agree and completely disagree at the same time.
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It is a supporting point explaining how sports lessons in schools can filter through to family members producing a positive effect on health for both parents and children. Make sure you can see the difference between a main point which is off topic and a supporting point which explains deeper.
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hi Liz, in the last part of third paragraph, it is talking about the exercise with parents but is it included in the school curriculum or a general statement ?

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Look at the question and see if it is past tense, future or present. You should also offer other tenses such as perfect tenses and conditionals.

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Hi Liz,Do I need to indent at the first line of each paragraph?

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Not neutral. yYou MUST present an opinion which shows a clear position. However, you can present a balanced approach. This does not mean sitting on the fence, it means having a view which only partially agrees – it’s like your own specific opinion.

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can’t we discuss like agree and dis agree and concluded them at once

Pride in achievement. Joy in effort. Work as play. My father never attended college, but he knew these truths. He learned them on the basketball court, and he taught them to me.

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Thanks a bunch for your prompt response. God bless you.. 🙂

İf i wish to write a disagree essay should i write about the solutions to prevent it? one seperate paragraph for each solution ( education , controlling tv , to increase punishments etc)?

I see, maybe I deconstructed your sample in the wrong way. Once again, thanks for replying

Thank you for your prompt response.

English professor Nick Capo spent many evenings during his youth playing basketball with his father. Although he preferred volleyball and books, Capo saw his father’s drive to perfect his jump shot as an inspiration for how he could live his own life.