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I like your methods of teaching writing patterns as well as your advices. I will be taking the exam by next week and I’m hoping that you can give an advice to my writing. My aim is to have a score of 7. Here is my sample writing with a topic about fashion.
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60]A ruler who is both feared and hated may be successful -- as Machiavelli says, "one may win dominion" -- but the foundations of success will be unsound: died unchallenged in power and dominion, but his son reigned only two years before universal rebellion overthrew the Qin Dynasty.
The way that was followed by the celestials may be followed by all.
It may be stated that most of the tenants of Glendale appear to be allhard-working, industrious men, and their houses are better, on the whole,than any crofter district that that we have yet visited in Skye.
We have been crowned with success...", translated by Chakravarthi V.
Whensome of the present crofters, they say, came into possession of their crofts,the town-ship of Glasvein was allotted to seven tenants, each paying an averagerent of £5, whereas now the township is in the possession of 12 crofters,paying each an average rent of £4 or so.
No. Just state the causes and solutions. As shown in the essay above.
The petition containedthe following estimate of factors :-" Unless poor crofters are to be protectedby the proprietor of the estate, we need not expect anything better thansuppression from factors who are constantly watching and causing the down-fallof their fellow-beings, in order to turn their small portion of the soilinto sheep-walks." These tenants prayed that the evicted townships of Lowerkell,Ramasaig, and Hamara, should be restored to the tenants, and thus to affordrelief to the overcrowded townships.