Introductions are very important.

All parts of your opinion must be explained in detail in the body paragraphs. you would have one body paragraph explaining why you support the use of phyiscal edu in school and then a second body paragraph about the need for a better diet. Always organise your ideas logically into paragraphs.

Read the following description of the parts.

The introduction gives the reader his/her first impression of the text.

Here are some examples of weak and strong evidence sections:

It’s important to end with your own analysis of the information rather than with evidence. This keeps you "in control" of the paper; if you end with evidence, you’re emphasizing ideas from your sources rather than your own. The reader relies on you to analyze the evidence in the paragraph and explain why it matters to the claim and to the rest of the paper.

Evidence that includes information from one source (weak evidence):

1. Some people think that the key to solving these issues is to have more sport …
2. Some people think that the key to solve these issues is to have more sport ….

Attach a problematising phrase to the statement to make it appear debatable and possibly untrue.

can’t we discuss like agree and dis agree and concluded them at once

My definition of true friendship is someone who sticks around when things get tough. I’m thankful I’ve met her and I hope our friendship last forever.

Thanks liz it helps me most to solve every confusion……

Hi Liz,
Is it absolutely necessary not to use the same words from the question in paraphrasing the question statement? Or you can use some words like in your intro where you used the phrase “some people think that” which was already used in the question statement. Paraphrasing eats up a lot of my time so I was think may be I could copy some part of it instead coming up with words to use.

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Not neutral. yYou MUST present an opinion which shows a clear position. However, you can present a balanced approach. This does not mean sitting on the fence, it means having a view which only partially agrees – it’s like your own specific opinion.

Lets look again at the introduction from the model essay on Marine Parks:

Evidence that is specific (stronger evidence):

For speaking, be chatty. It is essential that you give more to each answer. For speaking part 2, remember that these are not questions. They are just prompts and it is your task to add more information, description, details and stories to your talk.
Good luck!

A variety of different arguments have been put forward about this issue.

Hello Liz. Thank you for all your free lessons.

Do you have a friend who loves you ? Well , I do . His name was Tan . He was a very close friend of mine . He was almost like family to me . He invited me to played football every week-end . We had a lot of fun at that time . when I had problem . He always listened and helped me anything . Sometime we had relax-time at the coffee shop .
Last Spring that all changed . When I moved in United State America . We could not to saw , Played football , listened music …. But our friendship ever for ever .

Evidence that includes information from a variety of sources (stronger evidence):

Dear can we use obesity for overweight ?

The skill of paraphrasing is about deciding which words to keep the same and which words to change. Not all words need changing. But definitely do not copy long parts of the sentence. Just write it in your own way.